This is related to the derivative of the determinant: Wikipedia: Jacobi's formula
This is how I interpret your post in Physic SE:
> To find the **lowest order correction** to these Koopman's theorem results, let us ignore the off-diagonal elements of Σ(E).
If your matrix $A=D+hB$ where $D$ is diagonal, and $h\ll 1$.
To simplify, let assume $A$ contains no zero diagonal element, so $D$ is invertible.
$$\det(A)=\det(D)+h\det(D)\operatorname{tr}(D^{-1}B)+o(h)$$
So when the diagonal is dominant and the rest of the matrix $hB$ is of lower order (i.e. negligible compared to the diagonal) then the determinant is approximable by $\det(D)$.
_When $D$ is not invertible, the formula is a little bit more complicated (see Wiki's page), but I think you get the principle._