Note that if this is what your sister wrote for the second answer:
$$\iff x - 23 = -8 \iff x = -8 + 23 \iff x = 15$$
...then indeed, the instructor look off points for having used the first "$\iff$" symbol at the start of the string of equivalences, since it is meaningless, and at worse states that $$\text{nothing} \iff x - 23 = -8$$
An equation is true or false, depending on $x$ in this case. The left hand side ("nothing") is neither true nor false. The right hand side is either true or false, depending on $x$. The two cannot be equivalent.