Your note is twice as long as the proof you're criticizing :-) The proof, like your note, is essentially just briefly explaining why there must be a saturated graph. Even just explaining the term "saturated graph" would take up about as much space. Compare:
> Let $G$ be a counterexample to $A$. Saturate the graph by adding edges until adding any edge will violate $A$. Let the saturated graph be $G'$. Then...
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> Let $G$ be a saturated counterexample to $A$, where a graph is saturated if it is impossible to add edges without violating $A$. Then ...
This saves only a couple of letters, but fails to explain why there should be such a counterexample. Unless the level of the text is such that this can be assumed to be obvious, the first seems preferable.