What you have written looks sensible. I suspect the book missed a power of $2$ and was aiming to say $$\frac{^4C_{2} \cdot 2^2 \cdot 4^2}{6^4}=\frac{8}{27}.$$
The probabilities for $0,1,2,3,4$ girl representatives are $\dfrac{16}{81},\dfrac{32}{81},\dfrac{24}{81},\dfrac{8}{81},\dfrac{1}{81}$ respectively, summing to $1$, and $\dfrac{24}{81}=\dfrac{8}{27}$.